February 5

The Magic Car

by Aiden.

by Aiden.

Once upon a time there was a car which could talk. It could turn into a human being or it could drive itself in car mode.  It was black and red and orange and yellow.  It had fire flames on the paint. It could talk in every language and it could see.  Sometimes a person called Ben could drive it and the car could fly .

One day the crown jewels were stolen and Ben went to the magic car called Shadow.  They went to find the crown jewels and they hacked into the cameras and figured out that it was one of the guards. One of the guards had crept in at night and stole them.

Next Ben and Shadow figured out the guard’s name was Stuart West and his gang who had managed to get a key card which could go into all the rooms in the palace.  They figured out where the gang hid but they couldn’t get in. So they knocked someone out and took his clothes and keys.  They got into the club and they stole back the crown jewels but the gang were chasing Ben. Ben and Shadow turned around and were chasing them.

They called the police and the gang were all arrested. Shadow and Ben returned to the palace and gave back the crown jewels to the Queen.

They all lived happily ever after.

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Posted 5th February 2019 by deanburnep in category Aiden's Blog

1 thoughts on “The Magic Car

  1. mrsdsroadrunners

    Hi Aiden,
    Your story about the magic car, Shadow and his human friend, Ben. What a great adventure you describe! I was happy that the crown jewels were returned to the Queen.

    My students live in Cave Creek, AZ, USA and also love to write wonderful stories. Come and visit our blog anytime and keep writing those crime solving stories!
    Mrs. Doran
    https://mrsdsroadrunners.edublogs.org/

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